planning- montage two re-shoot.

We decided to film montage two again where his ex girlfriend receives the break up text. When we played back the other clips we realised it was to dark and there wasn't enough scenery to make it look as effective.

The new montage is a lot longer and set in the girls bedroom which makes her look like a typical teenage girl as she is also reading magazine which fits in with the narrative of magazines. In this scene we have more room to film from various places getting in different shots whereas from before we were rather limited with space so we only filmed from mid shot. Also the girl has changed her emotion from being upset to angry/confused, emphasising the word 'WHAT' and she looks into the camera almost giving it a personal feel as if she is talking to the audience.